They poisoning my fantasy
Hurt
Its hurt
Burn my body up to the head
And down to the toe
Hurt
Its hurt
Its very hurt
Let me down and sink very deep
Deep unti far down in the ocean
Touch the bottom and up again
Now I'm change
Stand under the sun
Shine very bright
Clear as a diamond
Wild, strength, cold, undeathable
Live forever and be unbreakable
Tuesday, 3 February 2009
Live Forever and be Unbreakable
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1 comment:
Pretty good. Satirnya dapet, cuma ada yang agak jangal,
seperti:
Hurt (U put it there jadi seperti kata kerja, so it's like kamulah yang menyakiti seseorang, atau anjuran untuk menyakiti seseorang)
Its hurt (suposed to be it hurts)
Now I'm Change (Suposed to be I am a changed woman, itu lebih teges)
But u've made it pretty clear, that this poet is showing the gloomy side of your life path.
Emang ngga semua orang harus tau apa maxud puisi kita, indikatornya bukan kepuasan orang, tapi yang penting kamu ngerasa puas setelah nulis puisi itu.
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